tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6402031357820942778.post8621061762835079953..comments2023-09-12T04:04:14.078-07:00Comments on Angle 949: Trifextra-an untitled 3 person POV non-poetic pieceRachaelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12391186958774991367noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6402031357820942778.post-23581555044561747862012-05-03T19:47:45.890-07:002012-05-03T19:47:45.890-07:00I really wanted to go with some sort of lamb-sheep...I really wanted to go with some sort of lamb-sheep-?? trio, but I couldn't come up with a third name that still fit with the rest of what I'd come up with. I was thinking ewe-lamb-sheep but it I couldn't make it work. And I like how this turned out still, so I guess it works without the extra mutton reference...Hmmm, mutton might have worked well....Rachaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12391186958774991367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6402031357820942778.post-81711666944747854862012-05-03T19:44:58.510-07:002012-05-03T19:44:58.510-07:00Thank you Janna!Thank you Janna!Rachaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12391186958774991367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6402031357820942778.post-89321663966970707182012-05-03T19:44:20.298-07:002012-05-03T19:44:20.298-07:00Thanks for visiting--I really like when others can...Thanks for visiting--I really like when others can interpret what I've written differently, makes it feel more universal :)Rachaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12391186958774991367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6402031357820942778.post-57905152764797148732012-05-03T19:43:32.288-07:002012-05-03T19:43:32.288-07:00Yep. It's rather depressing to think about som...Yep. It's rather depressing to think about sometimes.Rachaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12391186958774991367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6402031357820942778.post-29965715548194583322012-05-03T19:43:06.978-07:002012-05-03T19:43:06.978-07:00Thanks Jennifer!Thanks Jennifer!Rachaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12391186958774991367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6402031357820942778.post-54815435803526358212012-05-03T19:42:54.283-07:002012-05-03T19:42:54.283-07:00It makes me sad that you can relate--seems like un...It makes me sad that you can relate--seems like unless you were one of the bad guys you were either the one taken advantage of or close to someone taken advantage of :(Rachaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12391186958774991367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6402031357820942778.post-73040312364723171342012-05-03T19:41:56.508-07:002012-05-03T19:41:56.508-07:00Thanks Winnie! I love the number restriction, most...Thanks Winnie! I love the number restriction, most of the time!Rachaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12391186958774991367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6402031357820942778.post-26172388104380145302012-05-02T10:42:08.184-07:002012-05-02T10:42:08.184-07:00That is amazing. I can't believe you can writ...That is amazing. I can't believe you can write with word number restrictions and make the story shine through. What a great piece. I could picture each of them in my head and their thoughts...Winniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15926597921523807422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6402031357820942778.post-79221392723831613642012-04-30T14:23:59.509-07:002012-04-30T14:23:59.509-07:00Oh! What a universal story. I can relate in ways o...Oh! What a universal story. I can relate in ways one can't even imagine!!!karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15428202747324083680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6402031357820942778.post-15672968153924814712012-04-29T19:57:14.380-07:002012-04-29T19:57:14.380-07:00AMEN, Sister! Well written!AMEN, Sister! Well written!Jennifer Worrellhttp://jenniferworrell.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6402031357820942778.post-21569458415084558092012-04-29T18:55:12.577-07:002012-04-29T18:55:12.577-07:00Yah. Ponzi schemes don't just rely on the Mado...Yah. Ponzi schemes don't just rely on the Madoff's of the world.Jester Queenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10441806535770013592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6402031357820942778.post-3567589846943415972012-04-29T17:02:20.160-07:002012-04-29T17:02:20.160-07:00Wonderfully done. I saw #2 as Him, seeing what was...Wonderfully done. I saw #2 as Him, seeing what was happening, but rather than wrath or pity, He just observes. <br /><br />Thanks for sharing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6402031357820942778.post-26970950647900430972012-04-29T14:14:11.209-07:002012-04-29T14:14:11.209-07:00I like the dynamic between the mother and son. It...I like the dynamic between the mother and son. It's too bad the minister isn't thinking of charity instead.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com